Wild Goose Poetry Review

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Something to Expiate, by William Cullen, Jr.

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William Cullen, Jr.
SOMETHING TO EXPIATE

Digging for bait
I envy a small robin
just twelve feet away
pulling up worm after worm
I’d hire him if I could.

Instead I wait
until it starts struggling
to yank up one more
then I charge the bird quickly
and grab the old night crawler

But I’d like to think
that she showed me some pity
and it wasn’t just
haste alone that made her leave
her children’s meal behind.

Bio: William Cullen, Jr., is a veteran and works at a non-profit in Brooklyn, NY. He’s married and has two college-age sons. His writing has appeared in Asahi/International Herald Tribune, Boston Literary Magazine, Christian Science Monitor, Farming Magazine, Grey Sparrow Journal, Home Planet News, Willows Wept Review, Written River (Hiareth Press), among
others. He was nominated for a Pushcart prize in 2010.

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May 15, 2012 at 12:39 pm

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  1. haste? not intimidation?
    chased bird…not hasty bird. ;-)

    Thanks. i enjoyed it.

    Randy (thewritersvillage.wordpress.com)

    Randy Mazie

    May 16, 2012 at 1:44 am

  2. >haste? not intimidation?

    The “intimidation” is explicitly acknowledged in the second stanza and the “haste” follows the intimidation as a direct downstream consequence. But “haste” also softens the blow to my conscience as I try imagine the bird feeling sorry for me when I’m feeling sorry for myself and a bit guilty as well.

    Thanks for your kind comment about liking the poem.

    Best,

    Bill Cullen

    William Cullen Jr

    May 17, 2012 at 3:05 pm

  3. I thought this was like a found crystal, a small perfect gem.

    jlcannon

    October 20, 2012 at 3:19 pm

    • jlcannon,

      Thanks for your encouraging words.

      All good things,

      Bill Cullen

      Bill Cullen

      November 6, 2012 at 5:02 pm


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