Wild Goose Poetry Review

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Earth Talk, Douglas McHargue

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Douglas McHargue
EARTH TALK

He comes down the hill
head held high, toughened
cheekbones, eyes searching
horizon like some Mayan warrior
emerging from lost cities
long slipped into vine-laced fog
leaving altars, stone work
and him.

Crossing the road, he slings
post hole digger weapon-like
across his shoulder
ready for spilled blood,
but lines up with bronze men
slicing red clay, laying it open
for wire talk so we can
all go on and on about
airline peanuts’ shocking cost,
cellulite ruining our lives,
end of world football lockouts.

Ground gutted, cable goes in
and he remembers
how his grandfathers
laid hands on the earth,
heard everything.

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Written by wildgoosepoetryreview

November 26, 2012 at 2:07 am

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  1. Douglas, you always leave me with the feeling as if I have experienced another piece of the world I could never have seen on my own. Absolutely wonderful poetry.

    Samuel Fox

    November 26, 2012 at 12:40 pm

    • Sam, I’m glad you liked my poem and many thanks for your generous comments!
      Doug

      Douglas Anne McHargue

      November 30, 2012 at 9:44 pm

  2. Superb poem. I feel the hands on the earth, listening…. Thank you.

    Maren O. Mitchell

    November 28, 2012 at 3:12 am

  3. Super poem. Well written!

    Brenda Kay Ledford

    November 28, 2012 at 8:17 pm

    • Thank you so much and I loved your poem, especially the last stanza… “to grind her bones into dust”.

      Douglas Anne McHargue

      November 30, 2012 at 9:47 pm

  4. Douglas, had to say again, as I reread this poem – what a GOOD poem!

    Maren O. Mitchell

    November 30, 2012 at 5:49 pm

    • Thank you for your kind comments. I feel complimented to receive them from such a fine poet – “Breath” is a great poem.

      Douglas Anne McHargue

      November 30, 2012 at 9:56 pm

      • My thanks!

        Maren O. Mitchell

        December 2, 2012 at 3:54 am

  5. Douglas Anne, I am in the Yucatan among the Mayan ruins which makes the fantastic imagery of your poem even more real. I always get so much from your poetry. Thanks for this one.

    Patricia Deaton

    February 1, 2013 at 2:02 am

  6. You’re really there? Wow – how I envy you – I bet you get several poems from this trip!

    Douglas Anne McHargue

    February 1, 2013 at 10:31 pm


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