Wild Goose Poetry Review

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The Offering Plate, by Brenda Smith

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Brenda Smith
THE OFFERING PLATE

The collection plate passes
On down the pew row
Empty
“I know this guy named Pete.
A black guy. A really nice guy.
In downtown Greensboro—homeless.
I give to him whenever I can.”
And the plate travels farther
Empty

And which is more pure a gift?
Five dollars in the plate
Or one dollar in the hand?
The five goes farther, further
All around the world
To the poorest of the poor
Or so we hope, by faith

But the dollar goes deeper
A brown hand reaching out
Not to beg, but accept an offering
A kind word passed between two humans
A gift of dignity, more precious than the dollar
To be treated like a human being again
Like someone with a name and face
To accept what a young white boy
Is offering
Not the dollar
Although it will do some good
But a smile and a look
Right into
your eyes.

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Written by wildgoosepoetryreview

November 26, 2012 at 2:17 am

Posted in Uncategorized

2 Responses

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  1. Brenda,
    This is a very touching poem. You’ve done a beautiful job with the description.

    Brenda Kay Ledford

    November 28, 2012 at 8:11 pm

    • Brenda, thank you so very much for your encouraging words. Sorry it took so long for me to reply– long story.

      Brenda Smith

      January 19, 2013 at 3:35 pm


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