When Night Becomes Day, by Ronald Moran

Ronald Moran

It is 6:45 in the morning, and the temperature
should be
in the mid-to-upper 60s, a great relief from
afternoon burnings in upstate South Carolina,

I am living out my days alone in a small house
wrong from the street, like a row house, put up
if the backs of properties face the uninhabitable,
like mine;

but all I am really thinking about is how to get
to sleep, now being like the middle of night
for me,
even though my dreams are taking on too much
of the bizarre,

as in a pair of lions chasing my car, and me having
to shove
one of them out the window, while my mother
more insane by the moment, and I have to yell
at her,

when, alive, she was just shy and self-conscious;
uh oh, I am on a golf course I thought I knew well,
and, whoa,
there’s a green with two holes, as if for beanbags

I am wearing a light brown suit, as out of place here
as I feel
on this course that I thought I knew, and there’s
sane as ever, leaning far over and making a putt,

at me as if I were insane (What are you doing here?)
but now
I am thinking, why do I want to go back to sleep,
when, Jane,
I have mostly nightmares since you died, and why,

I awaken, am I often talking out loud as much as
two sentences
to my dreammates, before I realize it, and I think
of the time,
in your last months, when I was dreaming of trying
to punch

some guy threatening both of us, while, in fact, I was
your small back in slow motion until you woke up,
Ron, what’re you doing? Stop it! And I did, my fist
in mid-air.

7 thoughts on “When Night Becomes Day, by Ronald Moran

  1. This is one of those gems of emotional disturbance memorable and acceptable for its intrinsic beauty, though nearly unbearable when the reader stops to think about what the poet is projecting. That last phrase is a master stroke leading the reader on…

      • Maybe it takes one to know one. My sympathy and best wishes to you, Ron. Let me know if you figure out how to be yourself again.

      • Joan,

        I wish I knew who myself was, but at my age I guess that’s a moot point. I hope you have you have a fun holiday weekend.


      • Ron, thank you for the wish. I haven’t known who I am for over 3 years now–I did write a poem about it. It’s the problem for us both, I guess. I hope you’ll have a change and a lift from the weekend. And thank you for responding to my comments. It’s like meeting a new to-be friend.

    • Thanks Maren. I appreciate that. “Flow” is one of the elements of a poem that concerns me the most.


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